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Lynne Formigli's avatar

I will never forget reading a 6th grade science research report where the writing was so bad I didn't know where to begin. to provide feedback. I looked at the student and asked, "What would Ms. _______ say about this?" (their writing teacher) The student gasped and grabbed the paper back from me. It made me realize they don't naturally transfer the skills they learn in writing to their other subjects. I was fortunate to work with a team of teachers who were empowered by our principal to problem solve these types of issues. We found areas we could agree on across subject areas, sometimes as simple as the terminology (1st draft instead of rough draft, revising and editing as distinct steps). The writing teachers helped me understand what they were trying to accomplish so I could reinforce it (prewrites, transitions, topic sentences...). They agreed to use class time for our students to revise their work. In exchange I agreed to include the writing as well as the content in my grading. I benefited by not having to read stacks of horrible writing. It was powerful because we came up with it ourselves rather than the normal top down approach. Collaborating with my team members to make our student's experience more meaningful was one of the most satisfyingly things I have done as a teacher.

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Bwahahaha. Your timing is on point! :-) The following message came via email.

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